By Holly Lisle
If I ask you to tell me about your character, and you tell me his name is John and he’s 27, tall, blond, and muscular…I’m outta your book. Gone. You have told me NOTHING that MATTERS. Who is this person you want me to pay my money to meet? He’s not going to be a tall, blond balloon if I’m going to buy him.
And you’re not going to sell that big young nothing to a publisher, either. You’re selling characters. If we’re going to call them characters, they have to have some.
Character, that is.
You’ll pitch your book with what I call The Sentence. You have less than thirty words to convey the highlights of your story idea so anyone can follow and understand it. In that one sentence, you will describe the main situation of the book, your protagonist, your antagonist, and why I should care about what you’re writing—the thing that makes your story matter. Call it your twist.
Your protagonist—your main character—is critical to The Sentence. You have about three words in The Sentence to nail him. No name, no physical description—just…character. You get to character through questions like:
- Who are the people who shaped his life? (His friends, his enemies, his lovers, his family.)
- What drives him? (Examine his desires, needs, fears, and struggles.)
- What is his occupation? (Examine his job, his hobbies, his goals and plans.)
Here’s what you’re trying to get. Start with Blond John the Empty Skin Suit. Is he a husband, father, or brother? A CEO, a carpenter, a sailor? What one noun describing him is MOST important to your story? Use that. And then… what’s he like? Driven, obsessive, pursued by villains, haunted by his past? Blond nothing becomes pursued father, haunted carpenter, obsessed brother…and suddenly we care. We want to know how he’s haunted, what’s pursuing him, why he’s obsessed. When you can get us to care, you have us where you want us.
So keep going. You bring your antagonist to life using the same set of questions. Every story has an antagonist, though not every story has a villain. The antagonist wants things that stand in the way of what the protagonist—the hero—wants or needs. Whether you have a true villain who wants to destroy the hero or a sympathetic antagonist caught on the opposite side of an impossible situation is up to you. But what stands between them has to matter. It has to be important. And it can’t be just one big misunderstanding—because if you pull that garbage on us, we’ll never pick up another book by you.
You’ll build your characters in layers, one question at a time. Eventually you’ll ask yourself “What’s this character’s name? What does he look like?” But before then, you’ll have learned who his is, and why he is that person—which is the part of any of us that actually matters. When you know the answers to those two questions, and when your answers matter, you’ll have a character worth writing.
You can do this.
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